Reflection

As a copy staffer, I am the last person to edit every piece in the newspaper. In this article, my edits are the gray and green edit marks. When I edit, most of the mistakes I notice have to do with punctuation and spelling errors. However, to edit this piece, I corrected a lot of the wording to consistently be in past tense and active voice. Also, I modified some of the wording to use better, more precise words.